I have to say, the ending makes it perfect. Of course, I was using the 'page down' button to scroll through the page, and the last paragraph was at the bottom, so when I hit page down again there was nothing-- perfect. I even let out a surprised gasp, haha.
Fantastic story. Not your typical apocalypse, which I love it even more for. Great voices, great calm desperation, and just all around awesome.
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Date: 2009-07-22 11:09 pm (UTC)Fantastic story. Not your typical apocalypse, which I love it even more for. Great voices, great calm desperation, and just all around awesome.